Cosmic Reality

Cosmic Reality

‘Cosmic Reality’ – a poem to annotate a small tribute to the light that brings my world to life and keeps me moving forwards

I’d like to be in a place,

Where anything I say or do that takes shape.

Would be a tribute to her and her grace,

The girl and woman that gives me faith.

The mother unbridled of any shame,

The lover who could never be to blame.

I know it’s much to ask,

I’m not a man to complete this task.

I may never be a father,

To burden a mind like mine, I believe a disaster.

So, as a child I will always be,

Alone walking in places you cannot see.

All I can say,

In an attempted humble way.

I’ll give you the space to be,

So you can live and breathe.

Whilst I watch from the other side of the galaxy,

At your cosmic energy.

That at the same time sets me free,

And undoes me by the seams.

But, what a beautiful dream,

For a second, it was just you and me.

[Written: 2025-10-15]

 

5 responses to “Cosmic Reality”

  1. Swamigalkodi Astrology avatar

    Balanced insight, gracefully shared

    1. Adam (Tanster1080) avatar

      Thank you Swamigalkodi, such a positive compliment.

  2. yassy avatar

    What a poignant statement of poetic beauty. .. you write the loveliest of feelings wrapped in warm poetic truth.

    1. Adam (Tanster1080) avatar

      Thank you Yassy, that means a lot to me. 😃

      1. yassy avatar

        Welcome, Adam.

I am listening for your feedback and welcome your comment.

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